StRiPe (FINISHED)

[StRiPe]

Name: Stripe ((he was a loner before he joined the Clan))
Gender: Tom
Clan: Great Jungle Clan
Rank: Warrior
Wild Cat? No
Age: 21 moons

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Fur Color: light brown with darker brown stripes ((hence the name))
Fur Length: short
Build: scrawny, almost skeletal, with long limbs and large ears.
Eye Color: Yellow.
Appearance: Stripe can be described as any of the following: scrawny, odd, or just plain creepy. For a physical description, how about we go head to toe? Stripe has overly large ears, and his small head doesn't help but make them appear larger by comparison. He has a thin, angular head, with a small nose and a sharp-toothed smile that stretches across the tabby's face. He has large yellow eyes, that are round with tiny black slits for pupils, and his whiskers are long and twisted. Stripe has a thin neck, covered by his light brown fur with darker brown stripes. He is very long-limbed, although said limbs are very thin, and his paws are extremely large.

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Likes:
• Flowers
• Fights ((more when he's not involved))
• a good joke.

Dislikes:
• cats who are too serious
• Bees
• a bad joke

Strengths:
• abnormally long and sharp claws and teeth
• his scrawnyness makes him good at dodging and fleeing

Weaknesses:
• his scrawnyness also makes him easier to physically over-power.
• insanity leaves him with little understanding of right or wrong, making him more gullible.

Personality: Stripe is very unique. He can be aggressive or compassionate, and his moods change very often and very quickly. He loves beautiful things in nature, like flowers and butterflies. He's a little crazy ((OOC: a little?)), and smiles a lot, laughing at pain because he thinks that will make it go away. He has violent moments, when he'll attack anything that comes near him.
Stripe never seems to feel no sadness because he never lets it show, but in reality, he acts happiest when he's sad. He loses his temper often, having his violent fits and temper tantrums. He rambles about random things, he has a very quiet conscience, and he can't stay on topic, often talking about something completely irrelevant. His temper tantrums make him more of a threat than normal, for his logical self, however small it is, looses control completely.
His insanity has become a personality trait all on it's own. Stripe is not quite bipolar, but he's moods can change very quickly depending on what is said to him. The tom has little understanding of right and wrong, and rarely makes logical decisions, making him gullible. He has little knowledge of other animals, but doesn't seek to learn anything about them. His temper is not something anyone would want to see... it's very difficult to make him angry enough to lose his temper, but not impossible. When having the "temper tantrum" mentioned before, he will do whatever it takes to get back at the person who made him upset. Stripe's moral side needs a lot of improvement, and because of his past, he believes that murder is acceptable in the case of revenge.

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History: Much of Stripe's history is a blur... He was a loner who joined Great Jungle Clan at the age of seven moons, so he was a moon older than most of the other apprentices he was trained with. The tabby had been raised until that point by his older brother, Falcon. His mother, a kittypet named Bridgett, and father, a loner named Nothing, had been murdered, leaving their youngest kit in the care of their only other surviving son. Falcon was soon killed by some rouges for not being able to repay them with fresh kill. After that, the kitten fled to the Clans, miraculously enough.

Role-play Example: This is my first character, so here we go: The site this is from is Spiritical, a wolf RPG, and the character is Ragnarok. It takes place on this beach, by a huge ocean, on the WaterPack lands:
Ragnarok stared from were he sat, his gray eyes fixed on the ocean. This was the first time he had actually seen the area where water met land, and it intrigued as well as entertained him. The large wolf began to look around, taking in the environment he was currently standing in, just in case he would have to fight anything, for Ragnarok used the things provided around him as well as skill to defeat an enemy.
The lands smelled of a Pack, and Ragnarok knew that if they were anything like his old Pack, then they would not be very happy to see him. His old Pack... was himself on the land he claimed as his, which was about the size of a baseball field... He seems much smarter than he actually is.
Pack or no Pack, Ragnarok had come here for one reason and one reason only, and that was because this was where he had tracked Crona and Soulseaker's scent to. How dare they run away this far! the black-and-white wolf thought, his gaze snapping back to the ocean, But no matter how far they run, I'll always be able to find them...

((OOC: You were right... I guess that I just got kind of excited to be a high-ranking cat ^^ My friend, Katy, has a she-cat character named Soulseaker she's going to join as, and that character is very mature, but very young, so she might be deputy material after she trains an apprentice.
btw, if I make another character, do I put her on this account or make a separate one?))

[A B S T R A C T]

Accepted!
To answer your question, you make another character on this same account.

Pending...

Alright, so the problems I'm having with Stripe is his personality and his name. By the way, could you add moons to his age? People wouldn't know how old he is otherwise.

Stripe's name didn't seem to be explained here. I can understand his appearance, but it is rare, very rare in fact, for a clan born cat to not a regular clan name. The only way for that to happen is for a cat to have been a loner accepted in a clan. So, please fix his name or edit his history. If you choose to change his name, you can have him like to go by Stripe, if you'd like.

As for his personality, well I likely see it being hard for Stripe to become deputy. For one, he is still rather young(not even at 2 years), and most likely not as experienced as other cats. Has he even had an apprentice yet? Back to his personality. I can understand him being a little crazed, but perhaps you could explain this more thoroughly? I have trouble believing that a bipolar, temperamental and out of control cat would be deputy.

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